Sunday, March 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hello everyone! Today I’m participating in Six Sentence Sunday. It’s my first time doing this and I really hope you enjoy my little excerpt. Those are the first six sentences from my first published short story, “The Problem with Love Spells” which is included in Evernight Publishing’s “Indecent Encounters” Menage Anthology.




“Are you insane?” Windred’s intense blue eyes appeared larger than usual as she stared at Gretchen, with her mouth agape and a look of utter dismay on her face.

Gretchen shrugged, feigning innocence. “How was I supposed to know this was going to happen?”

Windred sat down at the kitchen table and put her hand to her forehead. “The thirty million warnings you’ve had in your lifetime should have been a red flag.”

PS: If you’re intrigued and want to read more, buy it here (Evernight Publishing) or here (Amazon.com).

21 comments:

  1. Hi,

    Hee hee, what happened?

    Nice one!

    best
    F

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  2. very intriguing. Am wondering what happened!

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  3. Very interesting! Loved the last line :)

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  4. That's an intriguing hook, great last line!

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  5. Interesting snippet with a great hook.

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  6. welcome ! definately want more !

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  7. Great snippet! Really enjoyed the tension. Makes me want to read more. :)

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  8. Welcome! Great six! I definitely want to read more.

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  9. Great setup. Wondering about these two already.

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  10. lol! Love her answer. Great set-up, I am dying to know more.

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  11. Congratulations on the publications. Those are nice six sentences.
    maybe feigning innocence is too much telling, but who am I to say when this is published.
    Nahno ∗ McLein

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  12. WElcome to your first 6SS. Great snippet

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  13. I like your blog! I'm following you and I am also taking part in the A-Z Challenge, I look forward to seeing your entries. RuthieTootieWishes

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  14. I definitely want to know what happens next!

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  15. I like the dynamic between these two. Nice six!

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  16. Intriguing! What has happened, and is about to happen? I'll be back next week to find out.

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  17. All right, I'm totally hooked. You must share more of this!

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  18. *waving hello back* ;] great first 6! I'm left wondering what Gretchen did.

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