tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post2789284398111250220..comments2023-11-02T05:36:01.108-05:00Comments on Angelina Rain: Six Sentence SundayAngelina Rainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16953868243120764347noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-44145833078312349622011-04-04T10:04:09.933-05:002011-04-04T10:04:09.933-05:00Very nice opening line!Very nice opening line!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-53766877214832659612011-04-04T09:31:12.125-05:002011-04-04T09:31:12.125-05:00Thank you all for the comments. I really appreciat...Thank you all for the comments. I really appreciate it. Like I said, this was choppy and unedited, so thanks for the pointers on how to make this better. And Maria Z, that’s a great idea, I’ll have to incorporate that into the story.Angelina Rainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16953868243120764347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-14968147176777612862011-04-04T07:43:32.137-05:002011-04-04T07:43:32.137-05:00This is great and I love Maria's suggestion. C...This is great and I love Maria's suggestion. Can't wait to read more!<br /><br /><a href="http://www.elliegarratt.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Ellie Garratt</a>Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-53513973045334896042011-04-04T07:37:35.513-05:002011-04-04T07:37:35.513-05:00Since this is going to be humorous, go for the bol...Since this is going to be humorous, go for the bold.<br /><br /><i>Grace Alderson felt like a stalker, watching the man who took her breath away...</i><br /><br />Then make her trip, sneeze, or step on the cat's tail. Something funny to set the tone. I love what you have here though. Great start--great title!Maria Zanninihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01604862636922299273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-10509167294026802772011-04-04T07:36:23.553-05:002011-04-04T07:36:23.553-05:00Forget the book, I want to see the movie :)
Sound...Forget the book, I want to see the movie :)<br /><br />Sounds good. You have a terrific writing genre there, so many posibilities to play with.Tony Paynehttp://www.delovesto.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-37727531648683361002011-04-04T06:59:00.304-05:002011-04-04T06:59:00.304-05:00Great start! This was great!Great start! This was great!Renaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08190361875174742351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-22394733406100229642011-04-04T03:19:48.390-05:002011-04-04T03:19:48.390-05:00Great six.Great six.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-71805954331531555672011-04-03T19:03:17.947-05:002011-04-03T19:03:17.947-05:00If Grace is having that reaction and Mr. Sawyers h...If Grace is having that reaction and Mr. Sawyers hasn't touched her yet...I wondered what Marie wondered too. Interesting start.J.L. Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-20182202704208613742011-04-03T18:30:59.783-05:002011-04-03T18:30:59.783-05:00Nice. but does he run his hands over the wood or t...Nice. but does he run his hands over the wood or through it?Marie Deeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02227521965829153174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-4724769564131684992011-04-03T15:59:36.125-05:002011-04-03T15:59:36.125-05:00Niiice. Definitely great material for rewriting :)...Niiice. Definitely great material for rewriting :)lexcadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18094072290983267178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-220505533141310522011-04-03T15:44:23.395-05:002011-04-03T15:44:23.395-05:00Good start. A fun snippet. :)Good start. A fun snippet. :)Lorien Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299242632625658988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-5262020439267900022011-04-03T13:14:47.343-05:002011-04-03T13:14:47.343-05:00A great start! Nice :)A great start! Nice :)Lucy Felthousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02164383675268417252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-67793358493602109842011-04-03T11:00:39.225-05:002011-04-03T11:00:39.225-05:00pooled where? where?pooled where? where?Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-21729113008246516562011-04-03T10:36:16.073-05:002011-04-03T10:36:16.073-05:00I agree - bit choppy but good material to work wit...I agree - bit choppy but good material to work withAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-24679000016389077102011-04-03T10:27:35.226-05:002011-04-03T10:27:35.226-05:00Who wouldn't peek out the window at the beefca...Who wouldn't peek out the window at the beefcake next door. Nice show. <br />One question through, how does he run his hands through a piece of wood?<br />What is he doing?D L Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03005096541408308851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-10120883870669315212011-04-03T08:15:10.264-05:002011-04-03T08:15:10.264-05:00Aw, poor Grace. Great six!Aw, poor Grace. Great six!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039391701819796271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-74935182236163910202011-04-03T05:20:23.932-05:002011-04-03T05:20:23.932-05:00Wow - that's a great start to my Sunday right ...Wow - that's a great start to my Sunday right there. Thanks for sharing!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.com