tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post912325949637502787..comments2023-11-02T05:36:01.108-05:00Comments on Angelina Rain: New Creations BlogfestAngelina Rainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16953868243120764347noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-76648989024472027812011-01-06T08:53:02.553-06:002011-01-06T08:53:02.553-06:00Nice choice of verb on the ending sentence. Good l...Nice choice of verb on the ending sentence. Good luck on you book.<br /><br />The first line is disturbing. Creating emotion on the first sentence is a major hook. Good job.<br /><br /><br />MichaelMichael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-73097772398524838982011-01-05T20:05:32.643-06:002011-01-05T20:05:32.643-06:00Hi Angelina
Your writing contains very different e...Hi Angelina<br />Your writing contains very different emotions soft restful warmth to end and a more suspenseful tone to the opening. They certainly don't belong in the same novel. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-889609545373657822011-01-05T17:07:45.770-06:002011-01-05T17:07:45.770-06:00Hello
I came over from Summer's blogfest!
Yo...Hello<br /><br />I came over from Summer's blogfest!<br /><br />Your last sentence - awww it's so sweet!<br />Your first sentence - I like the immediacy of the emotions!! <br /><br />thank you<br />Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-58165762362268052302011-01-05T16:57:46.255-06:002011-01-05T16:57:46.255-06:00Two amazing sentences there. One calm and soothing...Two amazing sentences there. One calm and soothing, the other getting me all excited.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10736441732672508192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-20818322191462323172011-01-05T16:16:11.521-06:002011-01-05T16:16:11.521-06:00Both great sentences; I'm eagerly awaiting Int...Both great sentences; I'm eagerly awaiting Intimate Healing!Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-73495191915602104772011-01-05T15:34:06.278-06:002011-01-05T15:34:06.278-06:00wow Ms. Lia I loved both sentences. Can't wait...wow Ms. Lia I loved both sentences. Can't wait for your book to come outJohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11956013312232879446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-46810906729074726642011-01-05T14:15:23.599-06:002011-01-05T14:15:23.599-06:00Way to set me up with 2 different emotions back to...Way to set me up with 2 different emotions back to back! LOL! Great stuff! <br /><br />Thanks for joining my blogfest!! Can't wait to see your entry!Misty Watershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298645748620886228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-48306520462527577302011-01-05T12:11:00.132-06:002011-01-05T12:11:00.132-06:00Great blogfest entry!Great blogfest entry!February Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01078037856070486022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-25508514461530028512011-01-05T11:57:39.389-06:002011-01-05T11:57:39.389-06:00Very catchy new sentence. Well done. :) I tried to...Very catchy new sentence. Well done. :) I tried to enter the blogfeast but didn't know what to do. lol. :)Suzanne Brandyn Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16969670520269001723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-663733053914950522011-01-05T10:35:31.701-06:002011-01-05T10:35:31.701-06:00Hi,
Lovely sentences both: in separate context.
...Hi,<br /><br />Lovely sentences both: in separate context.<br /><br />As one paragraph it lends a whole new perspective and a great opening for a new story! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-19865406957862024952011-01-05T09:03:42.942-06:002011-01-05T09:03:42.942-06:00Wow, such different moods! A lovely happy ending a...Wow, such different moods! A lovely happy ending and a startling beginning...great.Margo Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06759845391358543223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-41101719973399853912011-01-05T08:23:32.334-06:002011-01-05T08:23:32.334-06:00Hi, Angelina... nice to meet you. The second one c...Hi, Angelina... nice to meet you. The second one certainly draws me in. <br /><br />Happy writing! :)PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-19791717919070690862011-01-05T08:19:58.920-06:002011-01-05T08:19:58.920-06:00Your new sentence sounds like it has so much to of...Your new sentence sounds like it has so much to offer. Your ending sentence sounds like a happy ending. Thank you fairy much for participating!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-332858490828689890.post-82683337680997238612011-01-05T07:56:48.958-06:002011-01-05T07:56:48.958-06:00I love the different emotions in the two lines--on...I love the different emotions in the two lines--one is light; the other, dark and suspenseful. Very intriguing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com