I stumbled across this blogfest today and it intrigued me. It’s so easy, just take the last sentence from your favorite manuscript that you wrote in 2010. And then take a first sentence of a 2011 project. Here it is:
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Last Sentence: 2010 Project:
Her heart fluttered with happiness.
(from “Intimate Healing”, coming in 2011 from Sapphire Blue Publishing)
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First Sentence: 2011 Project:
The instant she opened her eyes, terror raced through her.
(from “Midnight Lover”, a romantic suspense I started in late 2010 and intend to sell in 2011.)
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So here you go. What are your first’s and last’s? Join the blogfest. Here are the rules and the other participants: New Creations BlogFest Info
I love the different emotions in the two lines--one is light; the other, dark and suspenseful. Very intriguing!
ReplyDeleteYour new sentence sounds like it has so much to offer. Your ending sentence sounds like a happy ending. Thank you fairy much for participating!
ReplyDeleteHi, Angelina... nice to meet you. The second one certainly draws me in.
ReplyDeleteHappy writing! :)
Wow, such different moods! A lovely happy ending and a startling beginning...great.
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ReplyDeleteLovely sentences both: in separate context.
As one paragraph it lends a whole new perspective and a great opening for a new story! ;)
best
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Very catchy new sentence. Well done. :) I tried to enter the blogfeast but didn't know what to do. lol. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat blogfest entry!
ReplyDeleteWay to set me up with 2 different emotions back to back! LOL! Great stuff!
ReplyDeleteThanks for joining my blogfest!! Can't wait to see your entry!
wow Ms. Lia I loved both sentences. Can't wait for your book to come out
ReplyDeleteBoth great sentences; I'm eagerly awaiting Intimate Healing!
ReplyDeleteTwo amazing sentences there. One calm and soothing, the other getting me all excited.
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ReplyDeleteI came over from Summer's blogfest!
Your last sentence - awww it's so sweet!
Your first sentence - I like the immediacy of the emotions!!
thank you
Take care
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Hi Angelina
ReplyDeleteYour writing contains very different emotions soft restful warmth to end and a more suspenseful tone to the opening. They certainly don't belong in the same novel. :)
Nice choice of verb on the ending sentence. Good luck on you book.
ReplyDeleteThe first line is disturbing. Creating emotion on the first sentence is a major hook. Good job.
Michael